A huge well done to Ellie Wise and Finley Hudson who are Star writers this week!
Finley has written a brilliant monologue as Jerome the Gnome portraying his shock and anger after being sold at a boot-sale. He used showing sentences to show the reader how he was feeling without actually telling them.
"You don't always actually need to say he's mad, I can show you by what he says." Finley
"You don't always actually need to say he's mad, I can show you by what he says." Finley
Ellie has written a diary entry as an astronaut in Space and included a number of adjectives to describe where she is and how she was feeling.
"I thought you be really lonely on another planet so that's why I said about him being scared" Ellie
"I thought you be really lonely on another planet so that's why I said about him being scared" Ellie
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