Zac and Bobby are our fantastic Star Writers this week. The boys had a super imagination when writing a diary entry as if they were caught in the Great Fire of London.
Here are some examples of the super sentences they thought of:
Huge buildings were crashing down all around me.
Blistering, flickering flames were everywhere.
Suddenly out of nowhere I heard an almighty explosion that made my ears hurt.
The bad, choking smoke filled my lungs and made me feel sick!
Keep up the fabulous work boys!
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