Wednesday, 13 January 2016

Star writer Pine Class

Congratulations this week to Jessica who is Pine's star writer! Jessica wrote her version of the story 'going on a bear hunt'. Jessica wrote about going on a rabbit hunt and came up with her own descriptive phrases, ensuring she used adjectives. In her story, we had to cross the 'hot, sandy desert' and the 'big, icy ground'. Lovely choice of locations, Jessica. Keep up the lovely work!


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